1.The best part of this portfolio was writing about my kids. Also, my reflection paper because I felt I had a good beginning paragraph. Also, I liked the structure of the paper and plenty of sensory details description.
2.I feel like I have several weaknesses. I felt more description and time could have been put into it. Less summary and better concluding paragraphs. I had a hard time coming up with topics and writing a thesis sentence.
3.My goal for the next assignment is to spend more time on writing and revising my own work. Also, in peer review because for some reason I feel rushed to read through others paper (maybe because they finish before me?) Having more description and supporting evidence. Work on grammar and “Local” issues.
4.I believe I deserve a B because I did all the assignments on time, attended all peer reviews, and took advice from your comments. But, I did turn in assignment that didn’t meet the length requirement, probably had some passive sentences after I revised it several time, could have more details and development and less summary.
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